How I reacted to audience feedback;
I have added a strapline 'Seeking The Truth, Harder Than It Once Seemed...', this was done so that audiences will read and hopefully wonder what the storyline could be about and possibly watch the programme. I have also included the name of the Soap Opera 'Affleck's Palace' so viewers can research into the soap and share it with their friends of social networking sites such as; Facebook and Twitter. I have also included the date when the Soap Opera is due to appear and what channel. The ITV1 channel has been chosen is because many soap operas which are aired on this particular programme focus on the genre of Social Realism and this is also my chosen genre.
Good but black background is a bit too dark, can't see Laurence and Alex properly. Maybe change to a softer grey? Text all needs to match ITV branding with colours and fonts, don't think ITV1 uses blue or purple, know they don't use curly serifs! Strapline could be sharper e.g. "Seeking the truth is harder than it looks" So, change fonts and colours, change colour of background, think about making strapline more catchy. :)
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